Kol Mikaelson-The Wild Original

SO there is this user Sir_Squirrle who was giving critiques left and write for all the sentences after seeing his corrections it felt like he was asking more for a professional novel not a webnovel (not the site)

SO I was being nosy and tried to see if he had any works and if he did would it be so professional 

but i found this guy gives corrections to all the novels he reads he would be a very good professional critique you can feel the disdain through the screen

ok I am just joking with you I know my work is not that good and I am trying ,

if anyone feels like they don't get the story at any point or there are any corrections need to be made please do mention at the point I will see what I can do 

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Kol's POV

I am surrounded by trees, a rum bottle in my hand.

Sigh. So much happened today. It's a good thing I've been shifting my anchor between my memories of Kol from another life and my mortal life in the other reality.

When I saw Esther again, I wanted to rip her throat out, feed her some of my blood, and turn her into a vampire. I'd compel her to complete the transition and then torture her for a few centuries.

But the moment I saw her, I couldn't do it.

The emotional amplification of vampirism is a bitch to fight against. I have so much hatred and bitterness toward her... but I still love her.

Fuck this family.

Once Silas is no longer an issue, I'll fucking leave them. I'm sure Rebekah will finish her school around the same time. Then I'll be free. I'll meet them occasionally, but for now, I can finally do some magic. Using my blood, I'll start experimenting this week.

I can't wait to try runic blood magic—it'll be an entirely new branch. And I'm not spreading it around. No need to get daggered again. I stole my dagger, sure, but Nik has others. I'll need to be careful and devise a runic ritual to protect myself from that stupid thing.

I should also think about altering my vampirism spell. That's going to be an immensely hard project.

Because I've been shifting my anchors between my memories so much, I feel a little scatterbrained.

I need blood. And sex.

Tuning into the heartbeats and sounds around me, I speed toward the area with the most life. It's near a college, where there's a party going on. College parties are always fun.

Sneaking in, I scan the crowd for the strongest heartbeat of the female variety. My eyes land on a beautiful woman with raven hair and blue eyes, looking like a warrior goddess.

I approach her, grab a drink, and flash her my most charming smile. "May I get the name of this beautiful lady?"

She sizes me up.

"Rachel."

"And I'm Kol Mikaelson, at your service."

We're drinking and enjoying ourselves, and I'm laying on the charm. Looks like I've still got it—it's been a while, hasn't it?

She leans in to kiss me, and I meet her halfway. Her lips are soft, intoxicating, and I just want to take a bite. But I am a predator of the night, and I know the blood will taste best when the moment is right.

"So, shall we?" I ask, flashing a charming smile, hunger in my eyes.

"We shall," she replies, pulling me toward the dormitories.

We slip into her room, and she blushes slightly. "My roommate is with her boyfriend tonight. The room is ours."

"No need to be nervous, sweetheart. I'll make sure you remember this night for a long time."

I start kissing her, my hands roaming over her breasts and stomach. I stroke her through her clothes as I kiss her neck, holding her close. Then, leaning into her ear, I whisper a question I already know the answer to, but I want to entice her.

"Are you sure, love?" At the same time, I pinch her nipple through her dress.

She gasps. "YES!"

I glance at the mirror opposite us and smirk. "My, my. Such a needy girl I've found." I catch her reflection in the glass, her flushed cheeks and eager expression fueling my hunger. Slowly, I begin removing her clothes, peppering her skin with kisses as I go.

She spins around, now standing in just her panties, and pulls me into another heated kiss. Her hands work quickly to unbuckle my pants and remove my shirt.

"Someone's eager," I tease, undressing the rest of the way.

I kiss her again, my lips trailing from her neck to her collarbone, then down to her breasts. I suckle gently before tugging her nipple with my teeth, drawing a soft moan from her. Then I return to her lips, looking deeply into her eyes. My hand trails down her body until it rests between her thighs.

"Darling," I say, my tone serious, "do you want to experience bliss like no other? For the rest of the night, you'll have to trust me a little."

I'm pushing her, of course. If she says no, I'll simply enjoy the night, drink, and erase her memory. But if she says yes... well, she'll see.

"Okay," she whispers, breathless.

"You really know how to make a man's day—after a century, no less." I smirk, baring my fangs. Then, piercing my wrist, I let the blood drip freely.

I meet her gaze. "Are you sure?"

Her breathing is uneven, her body practically trembling with desire. "YES!" she screams as my fingers tease her most sensitive spot.

"Very well." I press my bloodied wrist to her lips. "Drink as much as you can, love. Tonight, I'll show you such an experience, you'll never forget it."

I tear her panties away, sliding a finger inside her as she sucks on my wrist. The wound heals quickly, and I pull back, making her face the mirror. Standing behind her, I kiss her neck while teasing her breasts with one hand and her core with the other.

Her body writhes against me as I increase the speed of my fingers, pressing against her clit until she shudders with release. Her blood is euphoric, the taste igniting every nerve in my body as her heartbeat begins to steady.

Unlatching from her neck, I lick the wound clean, watching as it begins to heal.

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